ae meu, bom trabalho, mas naum pensa q eu vou dar um 10 ou um 9 q nem o rest dos brasileiros soh pq vc fala portugues... o som podia melhorar muito e a historia tambem...
(Engl): good job, sound and plot need improvement though
Muito obrigado, mas você poderia ter votado melhor para mim, contribuir com os brasileiros, q q custa heim !! + de qq jeito obrigado.
u hav really really good shots there but... the flash just didnt follow the song. i didnt feel it. and it got kindav repetitive and a bit corny as it approached the end. the firefly thing was awesome, though, and so was the shot with the different flowers. personally.. i'd finish the flash with a windy night scene or something along those lines...
and to the other music ppl who liked it... don't try to sound like a genius, its just barroque music so dont b so astounded and pretendin u think its the most amazing thing in the world. its a great song, sure, but dont get all deep about it really.. u look stuck up and dumb in the eyes of someone who knows what ur talkin about.
i dunno i dont have a lot of words when it comes to creative work. it was good. the music matched. the art could hav had some work but... fuck that the flash was good. and im sorry about ur dad.
good job. it was human.
reviewing as i watch...
i'll review it as i watch..
1) WAAAAAAAAY too long of a dialogue. And running over the maps too. If you want to make it watchable, add some action or humor... it's not bad material for a book, but for a flash... the first minutes are KILLING ME!!!
2) Good animation and voicing when the skull guy escapes... I would probably make the third soldier at least REACT to the fireball being thrown at him...
3) Good choice of background music during the rain. *thumbs up* Love(d) it.
4) The dialogue is a little cheesy... it's okay to a certain extent, but don't have TOO many of those cliches phrases of the type "Is my dream trying to tell me something?" or "I can feel something stirring up" (probably misquoted, but you get the idea).
5) Too many ideas, too little plot. But then again, this is just an introduction to a series... make sure you catch up with the ideas though.
Nice job. It definately has potential to be an awesome series.
good movie. i got meaning out of it. good job overall. the art is very unique, the animation isnt completely smooth but the overall idea makes up for it. cool.
thanks alot. By the way, the animation might be smoother if u reduce quality a little bit, some scenes are pretty graphic intensive.
oh the good times...
The Rise of MK: 1 was the very first movie i watched at NG... oh the great memories from those times when flashes were still somewhat funny. not sayin they're not now hehe but newayz.. amazing. its not as great as the other two but.. im sure the 4th one will blow me away. and its still great, the clock part and the rat gettin killed by the masks lol awsome plot, smooth animation, good sound and just brought memories of last year and even from far, far ago when i played the mario games..
thank you for the great series. keep on it. dont eat or sleep until you're done. im pretty sure i wont, now that i kno theres one more to come. and welcome back with the the rise of mk series. w00t!
this is soo hilarious!! you are my hero. yes, i am indeed the type of person who, not only laughs at anything, loves senseless comedy. its good not to use ur brain to laugh sometimes.. wow, along with arfenhouse 2, this is my favorite comedy at newgrounds... w00t! f33r da wr4th ov maggn3tz n l0bztt3rs n00b!
i dont know livecorpse personally, hell if i did watch something he made i forgot.. well, the point is that you know him better than me, and you'd know whether the tribute is appropriate or not. i can understand why hed think comedy is suitable given your description of him. ignore the mob, really, they've had retarded ideas shoved into their heads and dont understand how personal this is. great job.
in terms of flash, that sucked.. its just a slideshow. really, there is no skill shown and obviously ur goin for the easy 10 by reachin ppl's hearts. but its not good, not even original, so u dont deserve anything better than 2. Puttin the picture of the person jumpin was also a little overboard sick. the quotes are completely stupid. and by now, u shud kno that bush isnt the smartest person, so quotin him is as good as quotin a stutterin monkey. altho i appreciate the fact ur bein respectful to those who died, u kno better than me that u did this for a good score. if u didnt, then i gave u a 2 and u shudnt b sad about it b/c u did it for respect. and really, the reviewers are being stupid and close minded. plz dont let society get to you.
"We are winning the wars so u can stay free u stupid fuck!!!" - Ace_Punk
"hi fuck you bin laden ich werde dich bekommen und dann kill ich dich" - DanielfromBerlin
"we also need to fight to protect our freedom." -crossbones
"FUCK! this shit realy happend and fuck-loads of people will die. They nailed us hard.... and ran... what pussies don't show their face? but us, well we have class. We will just bomb the piss out of them. ;)" - durst1221
great job guys, lets beat the shit outtav them like they.. beat the shit outtav us.. so we can all be happy and.. dead.. gee i wonder what the other side of the war is thinkin' right now...
i think its amazingly drawn and the music is just perfect.. the animation, altho fairly easy, has not flaw and flows smoothly so props for that too. the ONLY thing i wud change: take the words out. leave it more open to interpretation. altho it mite mean change to you, other ppl cud interpret it diff'ly so i would take the captions out.
nevertheless, amazing job. definately one of my favorites.
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