ae meu, bom trabalho, mas naum pensa q eu vou dar um 10 ou um 9 q nem o rest dos brasileiros soh pq vc fala portugues... o som podia melhorar muito e a historia tambem...
(Engl): good job, sound and plot need improvement though
Muito obrigado, mas você poderia ter votado melhor para mim, contribuir com os brasileiros, q q custa heim !! + de qq jeito obrigado.
u hav really really good shots there but... the flash just didnt follow the song. i didnt feel it. and it got kindav repetitive and a bit corny as it approached the end. the firefly thing was awesome, though, and so was the shot with the different flowers. personally.. i'd finish the flash with a windy night scene or something along those lines...
and to the other music ppl who liked it... don't try to sound like a genius, its just barroque music so dont b so astounded and pretendin u think its the most amazing thing in the world. its a great song, sure, but dont get all deep about it really.. u look stuck up and dumb in the eyes of someone who knows what ur talkin about.
i dunno i dont have a lot of words when it comes to creative work. it was good. the music matched. the art could hav had some work but... fuck that the flash was good. and im sorry about ur dad.
good job. it was human.
I'm so retarded, I played until I got 106 kills and 361 money before I figured I had to use the phone.... GRRR
AND THE GAME IS AWESOME. I PLAYED IT FOR LIKE 1 HOUR AND ITS AMAZING. LOVE THE VOICE BITS AND THE MUSIC (especially when ur burryin ppl). just... whoa.
wow this is an awesome idea, i can believe i didnt see this when it came out. awsome job, really.
the game got boring after a while.. and the graphics werent too good.. the stuff he says is funny and all but i got bored really quickly..
And for the believers: 1. its a game, chill / 2. it's not disrespectful to say what u believe (even its stupid like this lol), just like u dont hav to believe in everything. whether u think the christian teachings are tru or not, ppl dont hav to and u shud respect that. if their the ones that are gonna burn in hell for it, let them. if ur insulted by it, dont play it. and besides, if u truly believe in ur religion, u shud b self-sufficient with it and forget about someone else's foolish opinion. the game still bored me tho, so i hope the idea wasnt to make ppl vote hi cuz they agree with freedom of speech but cuz of the quality..
good instrumentation. nice use of percussion and changes in time signature. good sense of minor harmony and tonal center. im guessing you have at least SOME influence (or have listened to) dream theater?
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there are too many people on NG who have too much pride to take advice. i can tell you though that my comments are usually very constructive and that im well versed in composition. ill give you my musical background if you decide to email me.
i review this song under Liscio - Piano b/c i had both review windows open at the same time.. so ill review liscio here..
awsome song! really simple chord progression, but the ways u divided the parts really makes it a powerful song.. the contrast between the really low whole notes and the octaves in the melodies at times. and very good early romantic period influences. i guess u like beethoven and chopin, huh? (im assuming u like "classical" music b/c of the piano heh)
awsome job! make sure you read my other review! i wanna kno whether i can borrow the street fighter song for a school thing!
Heh, don't worry about the flipflop it happens. I was actually influenced by a Final Fantasy song when I wrote Liscio. I guess some classical sounds came out of it cause I am a classically trained musician. Its cool that you would say that.
now... THIS kicks ass
i like this version waaay better than ken's (prolly cuz i used to play the game over and over just to listen to this song)
suggestions though: there's a part that randomly slows, i think its 4 measures before the measure with the Eb, thats constant in the game... and the two note transition (D-Db) from the main theme to that E-F#-G-A-E melody could be dropped one octave lower for a thicker texture.. thats just me tho. in the intro, u forgot the trumpet layer, and close to the very end u forgot that high pitched run down when the beat shifts from 1st to 3rd (that pause that picks up with D-E). otherwise, this is awsome. nevertheless, one of the best versions ive seen. and dont b discouraged by my criticism, i just find that it really helps ppl (as it helps me)
question: do you hav an original midi version of this song? if yes, i wud REALLY appreciate it if u cud send it to me because im doing a guitar solo of this song for my finals in music theory class next year (in around 5 months cuz those come earlier). id definately giv u credit for the arrangement. if i get a hold of the tape after recording, my friend will prolly use it in a flash too and u cud get credit for that. just email me at email@example.com n lemme kno if ur interested
awsome job man. this is one of the best versions of the song out on the net.
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